Review Detail of CrimsonEclipse in Dragon Rising

Reading up to chapter 4(Currently the latest chapter), there are a few things that stood out to me. There are some cliches here and there that you would see in a novel of this kind, however, this is in the early stages, therefore, it can go anywhere. There are some punctuation mistakes here and there, but to be honest it's impressive, especially for someone who English is not their first language. I'm looking forward to where this goes, as it has peaked my interest, and I hope it sets itself apart from other novels of the same genre. Good read.