Review Detail of soulshocker in Dragon Rising

I only planned to change the beginning, but doing so would effect the entire story very heavily and make things a lot more confusing. I will still try to use the material from the old story and incorporate it into this one with slight changes so that the story as a whole will flow better instead of mixing a new beginning with the old story as it was. So please give me some time to give you more chapters. I'll be sure to keep many things from the previos one. Also, thank you. Thank you for reading my novel and writing this review and telling me your opinions.