The concept is good and the story looks nice; however, it's filled with run-on sentences, grammar problems, and has a few rare spelling errors. The writing quality is what's holding back your work.
phamtonbullet
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LIKEevanescence:It is not rare...i can at least find 2 or more spelling mistakes every chapter like sight which is supposed to be sigh!!!....aiyo...sorry...it is just so frustrating...
Oxymoron:Rather every second word is misspelled... I personally find this quite unreadable