bro, you have a good story. its nice to see a new novelist rise up to shine, i will try to support you by reading and appreciate your works the grammar was horrible at early but its getting better and better later on, it's show how hard you work. we are really thankful for that. but you see, the problem is every new reader always start from beginning, and it will really help yourself if you revise you early work. I'm sure it will encourage many new reader. i thank you for your time and effort, i wish you goodluck
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LIKEes_willows:Thanks for this I'm really enjoying this story because I like the direction of the plot. But the grammar. It's killing me slowly. However, since it improves later on I'll try to tough it out.