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Shade11224
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So I’m not sure why this is a thing as 1. A biologist would not have the technological know how or the physics know how to build a time machine. 2. Why would he inhabit someone else’s body if he used a time machine, is he really a retard who killed himself and his soul inhabited a random body. Basically the writing makes no sense and just because it has a system doesn’t mean you can throw aside effort to even have some sense just so you can get to the system part. Writers should hold themselves to at least a basic standard of common sense otherwise it ruins all the other good points in a story.

The Gene Witch System

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BlueLightToTheWest
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Uhm, Shade, this seems a little bit of a scathing review for the first chapter. Currently, I'm not working on the story, but in the story I do suggest he has a team of people working with him. Also, he's not only a biologist, but a genius in many fields. And perhaps it was a little bit rushed, but I was writing three chapters a day before the competitors sort of abated my desires for writing. Anyway, I hope you will consider perhaps giving this more of a chance before you give it a one star rating...

DawnJester
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Try making it like a how to un-grow safely a humans body through time travel or sumshìt

BlueLightToTheWest:Uhm, Shade, this seems a little bit of a scathing review for the first chapter. Currently, I'm not working on the story, but in the story I do suggest he has a team of people working with him. Also, he's not only a biologist, but a genius in many fields. And perhaps it was a little bit rushed, but I was writing three chapters a day before the competitors sort of abated my desires for writing. Anyway, I hope you will consider perhaps giving this more of a chance before you give it a one star rating...