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jsoto483
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So I definitely have an unpopular opinion here for the story so far. Certain things just don't add up. For example, if iris was in her last semester of college, that makes her about 20-21ish. Apparently kyro already graduated, so is he older or was he just a genius who graduated or dropped out? The story is cute, but I feel some actions are definitely meant for younger people and not people already passed their teenage years. This includes taking responsibility or trying to be an *****. I understand that iris has nothing at this point, but she's literally just lazing around, mooching off of kryo with a whole arsenal of excuses. Like she doesn't try. Why not ask kryo for a job or have him help her on getting her footing so she doesn't have to keep relying on him? Or maybe do stuff around the house, try to clean or attempt to cook. She can even contact her aunt if she needs to for stuff, but she feels that would be too much of a burden. I just feel like she still has options but she's not trying/wanting things to change. Also, if kyro isn't into gold diggers, wouldn't this stuff still bother him? I know the author touched up on some stuff, but I just don't see how someone would just ultimately come to just accept a freeloader. And then iris's reactions. I know that most of the stuff is probably what goes on in a female mind, but to get mad at someone because they didn't formally ask you to be their girlfriend when all you've wanted was something more than the friend zone? Like he's trying his best with what he has, giving her everything she needs and she has the audacity to be angry that he made it official without her consent? Its like she doesn't realize how grateful she should be for still accepting her even when there's a bunch of red flags going off. Overall I really like the story. It's different refreshing and definitely original.

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SteelCrown
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Hey, thanks for the review. I won't say much, just wanted to clarify about their ages. Iris is 23 because she took a year off somewhere in between high school and her college finishing (she finished high school at 19). Kyro on the other hand is older. I thought I mentioned it in some of the chapters, but maybe not. He's 28 at the moment. There's a five year difference between them.

jsoto483
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Thank you for responding! I just want to say that I really do enjoy your story! You're doing a fantastic job! Thank you for all the chapters.

SteelCrown
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Thanks! And I'm glad to hear that you can look past the flaws that pop up here and there. I appreciate the constructive criticism you shared in your review ^^