The story or novel is really dynamic, explosive and interesting. The novel progression and development is good as well. However, the characters background needs a little bit more to stability. There is a bit of a hiccup with the translation as well. I believe in time, you will improve immensely. I love your story, it really takes you to a dreamland of imagination and whatever you can enjoy.
OmnipotentDad
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