The story is good and keep the good work for more interesting upcoming chapters, maybe slowdown a bit the progress of the MC it's kinda fast forward atlest put some small dialog in between.
Are you sure? Well this novel is a very slow phased, if i slowed it down more, the mc's reincartion is useless, becoming someone that wasted his 2nd life? Ir you can try and suggest here your opinion, and i'll review it, thanks for reading btw.