Review Detail of Saarlink in Masters of Faith Medieval

I can handle normal poor english but this is almost at the level of an MTL. The author clearly is uninterested in establishing his characters or his world as he skips over major events (discovering the MC time travels he is over it and knows exactly what to do instantly, the CEO of a company gives a random stranger an 11million dollar gaming machine for no discernable reason, and so on). If the author learns to use an editor and slows down enough try to tell a story with even slightly realistic characters this might be great. Not willing to waste more time than I already have to see if they ever do though.