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Review Detail of Zuvut_Shirizuki in Masters of Faith Medieval

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Writing Quality is good but I feel that you are a intermediate artist (solely based on this work) Stability is unknown as I just started reading it today. As such I will grade it as good. Story development is fair. It's moving a little fast but most stories in the initial stages do. The real question is if you can sustain the interest of the readers through the grinding phase of the novel. I rate it as fair because there isn't enough chapters to determine otherwise yet. Character design is fair. See above. World Background is decent. Details of his environment in the real world seemed seemed good but it felt really lacking in the world that he is probably going to spend more time in. 5star Excellent 4stae Good 3star Fair 2star Decent 1star Needs Improvement Thanks for your hard work and dedication to the art of literature. I hope you will continue in the future.

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I'd be shock if i became a pro, lmao, I'm a newbie