Seems weird to read the plot now. Why even mention his family? To readers, it's made to initially feel like he will get sent right before the bad stuff happens, so he can actually fix it, like every other novel like this. Nope. And there are a lot of issues, but I'm sadly used to it, since it is an original and a lot of people don't speak English as their first language, so I don't mind that.
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