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Review Detail of sensitiveears in Masters of Faith Medieval

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sensitiveears
sensitiveearsLv55yrsensitiveears

I really enjoy this type of genre normally but I just couldn't read further. The chapters are littered with spelling mistakes, the dialogue seem forced and unrealistic and the pace is through the roof. I really wanted to keep reading but the writing quality is not good. 5/5 for updating stability though.

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Masters of Faith Medieval

OmnipotentDad

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OmnipotentDad
OmnipotentDadAuthorOmnipotentDad

I haven't really seen any spelling mistakes... But if what ur saying is true, i'll need to change my releases from 7 to 10 chapters a week to 2to 3 per week, i'll check every words and re read it a few hundred times, since i only have 3 hours worth of writing time per day, if i wanted to sleep properly, 8 hrs a day, i'll get 1 to 2hrs of writing a chapter per day, So to increase the quality of my work, my novel's chapter well slow down it's phase to satisfy your taste, thanks for giving my novel your review... I wish i could find those spelling mistakes though...

sensitiveears
sensitiveearsLv5sensitiveears

On my phone right now so I can't point them all out, but what I remember is especially some capitalization mistakes after periods and the word "dealth". Pretty sure that is without the h.

Abcalltheway
AbcallthewayLv13Abcalltheway

Well Id reccomend using grammarly + maybe " or * before and after someone speaks since very Hard to know when it is inner dialogue /3rd view or someone talking :p

OmnipotentDad:I haven't really seen any spelling mistakes... But if what ur saying is true, i'll need to change my releases from 7 to 10 chapters a week to 2to 3 per week, i'll check every words and re read it a few hundred times, since i only have 3 hours worth of writing time per day, if i wanted to sleep properly, 8 hrs a day, i'll get 1 to 2hrs of writing a chapter per day, So to increase the quality of my work, my novel's chapter well slow down it's phase to satisfy your taste, thanks for giving my novel your review... I wish i could find those spelling mistakes though...
OmnipotentDad
OmnipotentDadAuthorOmnipotentDad

I`ve started using that on chapter 90 onward

Abcalltheway:Well Id reccomend using grammarly + maybe " or * before and after someone speaks since very Hard to know when it is inner dialogue /3rd view or someone talking :p
Fuzzypeach
FuzzypeachLv14Fuzzypeach

I don't think it's the spelling as much as the way the sentences are built and the choice of words. It does not flow well, so it makes for a difficult read. But this is something that improves with reading well made books and texts and by writing, so I wish you good luck and hang in there!