To be honest, I'm sure most girls would do whatever the MC is doing if they suddenly swapped genders. It's both a blend of curiosity and excitement of being in a new world and body.😂😂😂 Nonetheless, there were some grammatical errors and typos in the first chapter. I won't mention anything regarding the pronouns because of the note you left. Overall, this story has a refreshing feel as well as a comedic flair right at the start. Keep up the good work.
CheezyMayo
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