Review Detail of KoFu_ in Life Merchant

A solid 2. Great idea. But when you introduced the arena before even began to develop the life merchant story made me sigh. So much waste opportunities of a good story. So many loops holes. A will name a few that bother it me: -> The contract only specify that if he tell someone about him the contract became null. So what happens in that case ? The money magically returns to him and he keeps the gained life years ? The other party forgets about him ? Either case this magical ability will be very alluring to the underground world. If someone force to say who gave them money. You can imagine the consequences. -> Even in a offshore account he can't spend money in his home. He needs to launder money to appeared to be a legitimate gains. If not the government will be suspicious. -> What happens if someone ask for something that he can't do? What happens if he can't fulfill his part of the deal ? No alternatives explored. -> Range of the merchant world ? Somewhat we can deduce that is less than 100 meters while he follows the girls back her home. -> Body-fucking-change-pill and he offered that pill to a girl in a toxic relationship. Not even thinking about trans ? Fame wannabes girls/boys? This people will literally die for that opportunities. Even add a clause that if they reach fame they will deposit a certain percentage of money each month. -> You changed the requisite of omnipotent sight from lvl 2 to 3 from 10.000 to 1.000.000 and somehow the mc completed that in less than a month ? Bs. Sorry. Dropped the novel. Maybe even will write a similar but logical story since I like the premise.