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Review Detail of XuenXD in Monster Pet Evolution

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XuenXD
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As of chapter 673, I would say that this story sucks. It started off really great, with a very strong plot armor and good character development that consists of different personalities. It was very fun to read especially MC's quest to conquer/raise its Familiars with its cheat system. I also find this story to be very unique, unlike those cliche cultivation/system novels. Overall, it can be seen that the story WAS progressing towards a good direction. However, here comes this stupid trend that most Chinese novel tend to have, that is the inconsistency where the story deteriorates and becomes so bad that it is unreadable, especially during the ancient tribe/war arc. The author loves to have different POV and split the story into different parts to create cliffhangers, but most of them are really redundant. Battle scenes are always very sudden and unrelated to the story where if you skip most of it, it wouldn't matter, totally unnecessary. The worst part is when sometimes you wouldn't even know what happened until everything came to an end. Translation quality sucks, likewise, inconsistent. It was all fine at the beginning, but when it starts to introduce the grades and tiers or whatnot, you'd realized that the translator don't even know what they are, it could change in the future chapters. For example, when the translator introduced a lvl40-lvl50 is King-tier, it could change to Emperor-tier, Imperial-tier, Royal-tier all of a sudden. What's worse is that the translator doesn't unify or clarify what is the correct tier for what levels. It's a total mess. After chapter 300 or so chapters, battle scenes becomes incomprehensible, and it's really difficult for me to understand what's happening when the author keeps switching scenes and POV. I suspect that the author doesn't even know Chinese, thus i went to compare the translated version with the Machine translated ones and I found out that the chapters are all EDITED, NOT TRANSLATED. Translator, just kys, wasting my spirit stones. Overall, the story keeps going downhill as it progresses. I warn everyone to stay away from this ****. Highly don't recommend.

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XuenXD
XuenXDLv2XuenXD

Ahh, one more thing I totally forgotten about, which is the revival of his deceased parents that should be part of the plot (which is also in the story’s synopsis) is literally non-existent besides mentioning it a few times in the beginning of the story.

XuenXD
XuenXDLv2XuenXD

Ahh, one more thing I totally forgotten about, which is the revival of his deceased parents that should be part of the plot (which is also in the story’s synopsis) is literally non-existent besides mentioning it a few times in the beginning of the story.

XuenXD
XuenXDLv2XuenXD

Ahh, one more thing I totally forgotten about, which is the revival of his deceased parents that should be part of the plot (which is also in the story’s synopsis) is literally non-existent besides mentioning it a few times in the beginning of the story.