Review Detail of Daoist_Phoenix in The Inheritor

After giving a careful read through of the book what I can say is that through the chapters the writing quality is similar to that of a high schooler. Not excellent, but still readable I suggest just carefully reading every one of your chapters (40 minutes-60 minutes) and just editing words and flow to make it a more enjoyable read. However, the author still puts a good deal of effort into it and tries to make it readable as mentioned previously. The stability of the updates is excellent as it hasn't been dropped and that's all I care about. The pacing of the novel is wonderful and never leaves the reader bored. However, the only con of this book is the character design. I feel like the author could have fleshed out the characters in a more descriptive way. Of course, we haven't even gotten to chapter fifty yet so its possible that the author will describe the characters in different ways such as an outside training arc, or a trial arc, but until that happens I will keep the character design at three stars. Finally, the idea of the story is excellent and has great potential to blossom into a wonderful binge read for readers all over the globe.