Review Detail of Picnictime in Demon Lord's Reincarnation

I've had chapter 1 of this story opened in a new tab for almost 2 months ever since I found it while browsing for things to read, but I finally found the will within me to begin reading and find something good. Chapter 1, he dies. Makes sense given it's a Reincarnation novel. The grammar is painful to read, but I have hopes that it'll get better. I find the purity of the demon lord's lust for a fun battle to the death exciting. I prepare myself for the new experiences and people he'll meet when he reincarnates... and then it happens. Every sentence I read, every new interaction, reaction, and action the characters make makes me more and more nauseous as I scream (silently) into my pillow. It just gets cringier and cringier with cliches that I would normally be fine with thrown into the mix until I get to chapter 14 and I just can't take it anymore. The god awful sentence structure and comma placement is still bad, and I just can't. I tried turning off my brain and enjoying the story for what it is, but it wasn't enough. I check the comments and reviews to see a generally really positive reception for the story with a few outliers who share my opinion. I'm sure there's SOME kind of great, next level character development that really saves the story in the future, but I'll be crying myself to sleep and wondering if I'm really the crazy one for thinking this isn't writing worthy of praise before I ever get there. And yes, I'm well aware that everyone is entitled to their opinion and that some people do like the story, dear Author. Apparently many people like it, and I just don't get it. Don't try to reason with me: I'm just here to leave my honest review and then forget I read this. Hopefully my opinion gets buried by all of the positive reviews so people don't have to see my disparaging words.