Review Detail of Datan in Demon Lord's Reincarnation
Review detail
I believe it was ok until the "second" reincarnation of Kretos. It's very generic for this kind of novel. There's a few problems I have with this novel. 1 Half the girls that he takes in don't have any sort of personality or reason to be there. (Hilda, Sword Princess, everyone from the Kretos arc) 2. He's the Demon Lord Reincarnated, he has the wisdom of supposedly 10,000 different reincarnations or even more. He's supposed to be very intelligent. He cares so much about his family and village, but leaves them to fend for themselves. You literally know that there are forces stronger than whatever Lisa could possibly train... He had established himself as a force already within Grenton, but he didn't move his family or his village there. Sure maybe not the village since he has the whole "I break the norm and only care about people I care about" attitude, but at least your family. Using Lisa and the Father as a way to push the story to some other place was probably the biggest turnoff for me. 3. What is the Kretos arc? It's a huge mess and the story could have taken a much better turn than that.
Demon Lord's Reincarnation
lynerparel
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I guess, well it has been a long time and at this point I don't really care anymore. Anyway, been a while since I got a notification so I decided to respond.
yug_moto:I don't know if someone has said this to you before but if you have to explain yourself outside of the story for things that others didn't understand the problem is probably in your writing. this is the second time i see the same comment so it must really be a mess.image
I'm sorry to hear that you won't be reading the novel. Still thank you for the time you spent for even clicking on it, and also deliberating if you would read or not. Hope you have a wonderful day.
shelwyn:thanks for the review, I decided not to read the story. it took a while to find a real review. anyway this review will probably be deleted soon so thanks for writing it before author deletes.
As for the Kretos arc, there are many who like it, but of course, there are those that don't. Can't really satisfy everyone. Finally about the wisdom of 10,000 plus reincarnations technically they don't share the same memories, and they don't really give him guidance except for when it is about the ORIGIN. Finally about emotions outside of battle is something new for Ren and he really isn't good with that. Did that part of Lisa and the dad because of the other readers as I needed to reset Ren, which is why the Kretos arc happened. All in all, I apologize if I disappointed you, and I thank you for reading thus far.
shelwyn:thanks for the review, I decided not to read the story. it took a while to find a real review. anyway this review will probably be deleted soon so thanks for writing it before author deletes.
magical realism is guess. mostly I dont like this story because I couldn't find a real review for it without trying really hard .
lynerparel:oh also I just want to ask, what kind of novels do you like? I want to know for future reference
lynerparel:oh also I just want to ask, what kind of novels do you like? I want to know for future reference
I don't know if someone has said this to you before but if you have to explain yourself outside of the story for things that others didn't understand the problem is probably in your writing. this is the second time i see the same comment so it must really be a mess.
lynerparel:As for the Kretos arc, there are many who like it, but of course, there are those that don't. Can't really satisfy everyone. Finally about the wisdom of 10,000 plus reincarnations technically they don't share the same memories, and they don't really give him guidance except for when it is about the ORIGIN. Finally about emotions outside of battle is something new for Ren and he really isn't good with that. Did that part of Lisa and the dad because of the other readers as I needed to reset Ren, which is why the Kretos arc happened. All in all, I apologize if I disappointed you, and I thank you for reading thus far.
It's impossible to please everyone, but it's one thing to please the majority, after all, if you write good stories you're happy, you make money and the reader is satisfied. Although it's been a while since I've read a good story. I think I'm getting too old for this.
lynerparel:I guess, well it has been a long time and at this point I don't really care anymore. Anyway, been a while since I got a notification so I decided to respond.
Could you or would you know how to tell me the age range of the people who read your work (plural)? I think I'm just in the wrong age group...
lynerparel:oh also I just want to ask, what kind of novels do you like? I want to know for future reference
the age group of those who read this story are people 19-24, mostly, but of course there are other ages as well. I just wrote this to relieve my stress from writing my previous novel. This was supposed to be a joke novel, but then some readers took it too seriously and it affected my writing which made it now kinda serious. Well, anyway thanks for at least looking at it,đ.
yug_moto:Could you or would you know how to tell me the age range of the people who read your work (plural)? I think I'm just in the wrong age group...
when the original says that a mortal soul escaped the cleansing did the origin not know about such a failure in the rules since if such a being created a whole universe and rules then he must be an omnipotent being and that escaping his foresight isn't logical or is it that though he created the rules they became independent
lynerparel:I'm not sure what you mean by the second reincarnation of Kretos.