Review Detail of DaoistLord in Demon Lord's Reincarnation
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Well written story, but the plot and mc aren't my taste, dumb but trying to pass off as smart. But Its well written nonetheless, you could give it a try if you'd like.
Demon Lord's Reincarnation
lynerparel
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Thanks for the review. Not really sure when the mc tried to pass of as smart, since the character doesn't really think too deeply except for things relating to battle. Still I would like to hear what made you think that the mc is dumb trying to pass off as smart. I just want to know so I can try to fix it to avoid other readers future misunderstandings.
Ch 15, it seemed kinda out of character for me. But maybe its just not my cup of tea, your story's pretty well written tho, I came over from Adopted Soldier, one of my fav novels.
lynerparel:Thanks for the review. Not really sure when the mc tried to pass of as smart, since the character doesn't really think too deeply except for things relating to battle. Still I would like to hear what made you think that the mc is dumb trying to pass off as smart. I just want to know so I can try to fix it to avoid other readers future misunderstandings.
There's also the part where he wanted to kill the soldiers for staring badly at his woman but around ch 15, he used her as bait. I would think he'd believe it to be a bad underhanded human trait which he despises.
lynerparel:Thanks for the review. Not really sure when the mc tried to pass of as smart, since the character doesn't really think too deeply except for things relating to battle. Still I would like to hear what made you think that the mc is dumb trying to pass off as smart. I just want to know so I can try to fix it to avoid other readers future misunderstandings.
Oh, is that so... I don't understand most of you A.S fans don't really like this novel. Oh also A.S 2 is going to be posted at the end of Feb.
DaoistLord:Ch 15, it seemed kinda out of character for me. But maybe its just not my cup of tea, your story's pretty well written tho, I came over from Adopted Soldier, one of my fav novels.
Oh that's right, I forgot about that part. I wanted to rewrite that. Well, I just write that off as him not being able to control his new human emotions like having bipolar disorder. But you do have a point will rewrite that part to make it feel a bit different.
DaoistLord:There's also the part where he wanted to kill the soldiers for staring badly at his woman but around ch 15, he used her as bait. I would think he'd believe it to be a bad underhanded human trait which he despises.
DaoistLord:There's also the part where he wanted to kill the soldiers for staring badly at his woman but around ch 15, he used her as bait. I would think he'd believe it to be a bad underhanded human trait which he despises.
lynerparel:Oh that's right, I forgot about that part. I wanted to rewrite that. Well, I just write that off as him not being able to control his new human emotions like having bipolar disorder. But you do have a point will rewrite that part to make it feel a bit different.
lynerparel:Oh, is that so... I don't understand most of you A.S fans don't really like this novel. Oh also A.S 2 is going to be posted at the end of Feb.
