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Review Detail of Elude in Demon Lord's Reincarnation

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Elude
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All my reviews are truthful (The way I review originals and translations are different), I'm not going to try and inflate anyone's egos if the book doesn't justify it. Writing Quality 4/5: The transitions are pretty smooth, nothing much to say here. (There are naturally your occasional grammar mistakes, but I'm not going to nit-pick something so miniscule. These occasional bumps in the writing have no major effect on the actual flow of the writing, which is really good for an ******* writer on WN; where english isn't the first language for many of the readers/writers.) E.g, In this novel you get your occasional use of 'Superfluous Commas', (where the writer uses a comma before because even though it is not necessary.) Examples of the types of minor errors I'm talking about, Unlike his demon family who only respected him, because of his power (Now, your typical extremely minor mistakes.) Kretos tried to speak, but was unable to. It would seem that his body wasn't develop enough to do such a thing. - Let's be honest here, we all know that it should be 'developed' and our eyes would auto-correct it pretty quickly anyway. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- It was at this point in time, Kretos lifted his arms he finally noticed that his arms were small and dainty. This was not the arm of the supreme overlord, this was the arms of a baby. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- (Alright, it doesn't take a genius to recognize that these two sentences aren't perfect. Yet, we as your average readers can easily understand the general plot and direction the author is heading with.) Stability of Updates 5/5: The updates appear punctual (good to see) Story Development: The story is primarily about the MC progressing to become more 'human', he enjoys the warm feeling of love and care from a paternal family which is progress. Character Design: So far I can say that reading only 10 chapters, the MC has character. I admired the way he greeted his son's betrayal, even though it's not very 'realistic' in human terms I still enjoyed reading it nevertheless. Perhaps I've grown tired of the common trope, 'You, a haughty young master stared at my girl? Prepare for the nine familial exterminations.' Yet, this is also the character's double-edged sword. (You get the feeling that since he can greet death so casually, why won't he just do the same in his next life? — This may just be my own personal agenda against tropes like these, many readers would enjoy this type of MC though, so no massive complaints here.) The writer is able to give a seperate and unique personality to his main cast, so it doesn't feel like that we the readers are reading 2D cardboard cut-outs. So here's my conclusion, if you enjoy the magical world of 'elves', 'demons' etc you will probably enjoy this novel. Personally, it's not my cup of tea, the novels I enjoy are less main-stream. (The types of MC I admire also differ to this type of MC portrayed by the writer, but I can't comment on 'Writing Quality' in the review due to my personal preferences.) Overall Review: 4/5 (For an original it's definitely above average, but would I compare it to the likes of a novel like CCG, or perhaps even the averagely translated Shadow Hack? No fucking way.) My personal recommendations: Doomed To Be Cannon Fodder, Transmigator Meets Reincarnator, EMHS, Lord Xue Ying If anyone wants me to do an in-depth review, simply @reply to me in one of my reviews and I'll do a truthful in-depth review if I can actually understand the flow of the writing. (I write these reviews so that the section for determining whether someone reads a story is actually truthful and not full of deceit.)

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Demon Lord's Reincarnation

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lynerparel
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Thanks for the review.

lazyleo
lazyleoLv7lazyleo

Hat's off to you. Truly, even though this novel is not my cup of tea as well, I totally agree with this review. There's rarely ever a review this honest and on point without any BS on webnovel that after reading your review I felt that there are still some good people left here who won't just spam/leave a 1 star review just to bring down the rating. 👏👏

reinsd
reinsdLv11reinsd

Can you review my novel too? It's a fanfiction called Conquer Your Own Fate. Thank you, Expert!

Elude
EludeLv10Elude

I'll definitely get around to it once I have the time, (I have other pending reviews to do atm as well.)

reinsd:Can you review my novel too? It's a fanfiction called Conquer Your Own Fate. Thank you, Expert!
reinsd
reinsdLv11reinsd

Ok

Elude:I'll definitely get around to it once I have the time, (I have other pending reviews to do atm as well.)
Nanakwasi
NanakwasiLv3Nanakwasi

What does the ccg stand's for?

ragnacrimson
ragnacrimsonLv4ragnacrimson

Good job

182001
182001Lv3182001

Thanks for the review

quirky001
quirky001Lv4quirky001

Wow! Very detailed and seems really true! thanks btw. You save me time deciding wether this one worth reading for.

ArthurHFSS
ArthurHFSSLv5ArthurHFSS

A very in depth review with very good points. I wasn't planning on reading the novel, but I might change my mind. Anyway, I would like to make a request for you to review my novel as well. There are already some readers, but they don't write a review. I need reviews to understand what are the faults of my novel and correct them, thus I can give the reader a better experience. By the way the novel is "Starbound: An Space Odyssey."

JohnnyKbca
JohnnyKbcaLv4JohnnyKbca

Don't know if you're still doing these reviews, but if you are, could you please review mine? https://***.webnovel.com/book/11167110406274305/Duality

AardwarkThe2nd
AardwarkThe2ndLv5AardwarkThe2nd

BTW can you mind reviewing my work? webnovel.com/book/11772678805522105/Villainous-Sect-Master-and-the-Endless-Wave-of-Heroes It is 26 chapters long. First arc is ending in a chapter or two. Plot genre: MC is a timetraveled transmigrator in a xianxia with a system (yeah, I was ticking off the cliches when I thought of the idea). Plus some R-18 stuff. Unique point: I am trying to stay true to the cliches in a way that doesn't seem like a mess. MC acts like a person from Modern Earth with inherited values. MC has future knowledge and is way too focused on killing a certain person. MC makes use of his system, but still suspects it because he doesn't really understand how it works. Please review when you are free!

dinchak
dinchakLv4dinchak

Your review made me want to read this story. Thank you. Did not read it yet but I can say from your review that this is a good one

Supreme_Leader
Supreme_LeaderLv12Supreme_Leader

Damn i didn't even notice that it was develop instead of developed. My mind auto corrected it 🤔

Supreme_Leader
Supreme_LeaderLv12Supreme_Leader

Damn i didn't even notice that it was develop instead of developed. My mind auto corrected it 🤔

Masterdemon
MasterdemonLv4Masterdemon

Book curator ..... I'll keep this name in mind when I check reviews of other novels

Vrad_Zechs
Vrad_ZechsLv14Vrad_Zechs

Dear BookCurator. How much chapters would you prefer to be available before actually doing a review? I am writing an original, and saw your review while browsing.

MC_Dakki
MC_DakkiLv4MC_Dakki

Hi! Are you able to review my novel as well? I've only recently published it here so there aren't many chapters but (honest) feedback is always appreciated. It's titled "Otherworldly". Thanks!

senkii
senkiiLv6senkii

wow thanks :)

senkii
senkiiLv6senkii

:)

Elude:I'll definitely get around to it once I have the time, (I have other pending reviews to do atm as well.)