Review Detail of WanDongDong in The Legendary Demonic Deity [BL]

Author Note: I am writing as a hobby but I tried to do things professionally. Although I need to work on my grammar more, my story is still readable and written in detail. I rate my review Writing Quality 3 stars because it is only average writing quality with quite a lot grammar mistakes. However, if I'm a person that just curing from dyslexia could read the novel without much difficulty, I'm sure other won't have it hard to read the story either. My grammar needs improvement but I don’t have a teacher to teach me, so I don’t mind it if you rate me badly because of my grammar since I understand that it’s important for the reader to read the novel. Just don’t expect for it to get any better if you don’t plan on helping me. Like I say, I don’t have a teacher to teach me grammar. I couldn’t see the mistake when I’m writing and re-reading so, you cannot hope for too much. Stability of Updates, I must rate it 5 stars because 1 chapter a day and if there are a lot chapters in stock I will update 2-5 chapter on Sunday or sometimes on Saturday too. Its depend on my mood, really but it can never be lower than one chapter a day. So, I must say that it is as stable as translator translating an available novel. Story Development 4 stars. Don't ask me why. I just liked how my story is developing. Why it lack one more star? Because it is not quite detail enough unlike professional novels. Character design 4 stars. I love my characters, naturally 4 stars. Why it lack one more star? Similar to the above, it is not quite detail enough but in the future, I will improve on this surely. World Background 4 Stars. No reason, just 4 stars. Source of inspiration: Library of Heaven Path, History's Number 1 Founder, Tales of Demons and Gods Disclaimer: I don't have the basic knowledge of Xianxia so do forgive me for that. I only know Xianxia from reading novels so my knowledge can be lacking. However, it is a certain that this novel is more of Xuanhuan than Xianxia. That novel cover, I owned it. I'm the one that created it. Warning: It is Yaoi. If you don’t like Yaoi, you can still read because I think that some Xianxia and Xuanhuan have acceptable BL moment too. If there is NSFW scene I will warn beforehand. There will be a rate for Yaoi moment. One star to five stars. If it is too explicit, I will rate it five stars, if it just both men being naked but did nothing, I will rate it one star. If you hate Yaoi, then please, I’m politely escorting you out of my novel. Don’t ruin the review just because you hate Yaoi. You may ask whatever you want to ask in this review but make sure to be polite to everyone.