Review Detail of CrinkleMania in The Legendary Demonic Deity [BL]

Item: The Legendary Demonic Deity [BL]
Rating: 4

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CrinkleManiaLv35yrCrinkleMania

Writing Quality is good, does not cause a severe headache while reading. Stability of Update was mentioned so it's perfect. Story Developments is good as it does not go astray too much. Character Design weird as ****... I know it's going to that BL route but... at least make a 'trap' well I guess it's the author's choice, but this was just my opinion. World Background is okay? except for that lazy hospital 'XXX' term on the chapter one, I hate when I see those things, just name it I guess. So yah, this novel here is okay. Do try it... I guess i'll continue reading it too

The Legendary Demonic Deity [BL]

WanDongDong

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WanDongDongAuthorWanDongDong

😅😅 I'm not lazy. I didn't think that it is so important since it is only a prologue chapter but alright, I will change it. From now on, even if it is only making a short appearance in the novel, I will wrote the name of the places. Just don't blame me if you get dizzy.

5yr

WanDongDongAuthorWanDongDong

Thanks for the review~~

5yr

WanDongDongAuthorWanDongDong

😂 as for the character design, please just forgive this author in the early chapter. As I'm still improvising most of the things that I have write since I don't really know how to trap the readers.😅😅😅

5yr