Review Detail of DeJeL in Double Souls

*Remember, this review is based on the first five chapters* Constructive Criticism: If you plan on pausing for a time, you should update your readers and let them know why via either your synopsis or reviews... if you dropped the book then you should re-title it to "Dropped" or something else of the like so people don't start reading it unless they are okay with an unfinished story.;,;. Positive feedback: I really enjoyed the five chapters you have written so far and hope you continue writing.;,;. Personal Feedback: I really enjoy this story so far and hope to keep reading, but, if you don't update by 6 months after your most recent chapter, the first of the following month I will drop it.