Review Detail of DemiLich in The Mech Touch

The premise of the story is absolutely great, enough to make it a top ranker. Not suitable for Sci-fi purists, because it exists under the pemise of 'what if a cultivation world never discovered cultivation and went the tech route instead'. Too bad the pacing gets so horrible that occasionally you can skip 10 or so chapters of self-reflection and pondering without missing anything, because it will be covered in a follow-up pondering session. There are also a lot of lengthy infodumps that become relevant tens if not hundreds of chapters later. Honestly, the story needs an editor who is not afraid to whip out the axe and cut the unnecessary content. Oh, and don't get me started on the romance department, it's a truly cringeworthy horror story, at least when it gets to the first girl he goes steady with, because PoRnHuB has better love stories than that, and so do some harem fanfics and novels. Would've been way better if she remained an ice queen forced to stick by the mc due to circumstance while still set in her own ways and culture, with the mc putting in a whole lot of effort to tame her, slowly working his way into her heart.