Review Detail of KeyboardHermit in The Mech Touch

Exlor, man, I would really like to tell that I loved the story but I can't bring myself to it. I know you wanna update regularly and that is cool But, If you are reading the review, I would like to suggest that Just don't drag a event beyond what is palatable. Add more events for God's sake, but but don't stretch it. Also, don't forget the system! You can maybe leverage it to shorten the rank promotion time... coz MC is clearly not going to become senior anytime soon with how the story is going on. You can also get the MC some cool gadgets.. he is clearly underarmed and does not seem to have any advantage over others. MC with a system need to be OP, atleast a little bit. Umm, yeah, that's all I have to say. I will add another review after some more chapters.