At first it was the storyline seems best of best but following later chapters you can see plot is stretched beyond to the point it hurt our poor mind and soul. Author seems confused to which area he had to develop plot (though written greatly). Most of time I feel author forget about main plot when branched to subplot. There is a cliff hanger (share issue on his company and system) and then branches to another storyline (going to military war) about 100-200 chapter and still didn't close the previous cliff hanger.
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