Review Detail of JimmC in The Mech Touch

PRO: This is a great premise for a WN. It's just fresh and interesting. While most stories would choose a main characters that's the pilot of a mech and goes on to fight heroic battle to save his home, the protagonist here is a mech designer that is just starting out and has to navigate the difficulties of actually building these mech. Things like problems in supply chain, license fees, design criteria all have to be figured out and overcome. The main character is interesting as well. He's not someone people are constantly fawning over, and has to fight and struggle to climb his way up, though he does have supporters they're not shy about criticizing him or sharing their experience to help him make an informed decision (instead of the usual "the boss is always right, everything he says is always perfect" trope you see way too often). Finally, the writing quality is excellent. You can tell that it's not just the first draft that's posted as soon as the last sentence is written (though if it was, that would be even more impressive). I don't think I've noticed spelling/conjugation/syntax mistake, which might seem minor to most people/writers but take away from the overall enjoyment of reading a story. CON: I have would be that it would be nice if he didn't have a system. It just seems overdone lately. If he had been a regular guy who got smarter/stronger on his own while succeeding in his business that would have been nice. Still, I can understand that it's necessary for the story to progress at a fast rate, otherwise he's still be stock at the starting line. Finally, this is a problem with all WN, but the development is just so slow! I feel like the author spends a bit too long overanalysing and explaining every action the MC makes.