Review Detail of LilyStarsMoonTears in Divine Ice God

aiz, needing to fill 140 letters...Anyways, I like the background before the true MC comes along(I'm predicting it's that boy from the ship). Poor Little Ice Flame... The writing quality is awesome with little grammatical errors(These are things everyone can't help but make...) The world background is actually pretty good as well as the story development. Yay, done. please update soon. p.s. Updates would be nice. p.p.s Don't mean to pressure you so continue writing at your pace. . . . . . . P.p.p.s Could you still give me a little tiny chapter update? >3