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Review Detail of DeJeL in My Name Is Sara (Hiatus)

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*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: When I read this novel it feels like it is just a different take on a ****** reincarnation novel, however, reading the synopsis proves that it's not quite that, so I think that being what it actually is is pretty good, however, with the assumption that can easily be made, it seems a bit slow. Though I honestly don't know what to say as to how to maybe improve this, I just wanted to point out what I see. Also, I personally (even if it's in the form of flashbacks or dreams) would like to know more about the MC. Positive Feedback: I can't really complain about quality, for the most part, I just don't really know what specifically to point out other than it's a unique idea how you are doing this, and unique is almost always a good thing.;,;. Personal Feedback: I don't really know what to think about this novel yet, I will read to chapter 10 at a later date to give more feedback, and I will tell you then whether I plan to continue reading or not.;,;.

My Name Is Sara (Hiatus)

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