Review Detail of ealdgyth in Flowers Bloom from Battlefield
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English needs to be improved. It's the only thing that's keeping me from giving this story a perfect score. Characters are well fleshed out. It's easy to fall in love with the protagonist Jun Hua, whether as herself or her male alter-ego, Jun Min. Reading is like watching bishounen anime, with a full dose of heroic beautiful men. Lots of action, intrigue, humor, and romance. Thankfully the writing has enough flow and sense, despite the poor grammar, to be understood. The plot itself is worth plodding through the grammar bombs. I hope Author Sorahana will find an editor to polish this novel, as it has great potential.
Flowers Bloom from Battlefield
Sorahana
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Great! I have "Under the Veil of Night" waiting in my library. I added it when I saw it's yours. Keep the fire burning. May your imagination never run dry!
Sorahana:Thank you for your review. There are editors going through the chapters, but it'll take a long time(^_^)'
ealdgyth:Great! I have "Under the Veil of Night" waiting in my library. I added it when I saw it's yours. Keep the fire burning. May your imagination never run dry!
Hi sorhana-san! I am more than willing to help you with editing if you needed :D Just so you know, I really loved this novel, but I agree that some things as to how it was written should be corrected. I read this novel for like 3 days straight and halted on the last 8 chapter updates because I'm afraid to get myself frustrated! 😂 thank u again
Sorahana:Thank you for your review. There are editors going through the chapters, but it'll take a long time(^_^)'
Hello, :D I have some reader-editors that I have in discord, but the pace is slow. If you can also help out, I'll be very grateful. However, I can only contact through discord as it's the most convenient one (^_^)'
CookieJiyen:Hi sorhana-san! I am more than willing to help you with editing if you needed :D Just so you know, I really loved this novel, but I agree that some things as to how it was written should be corrected. I read this novel for like 3 days straight and halted on the last 8 chapter updates because I'm afraid to get myself frustrated! 😂 thank u again
Oh i see. I'll dl discord to connect with you guys then! 😀 (I'm also planning to re-read the story so it I think we can hit two birds in one stone 😅) yay!
Sorahana:Hello, :D I have some reader-editors that I have in discord, but the pace is slow. If you can also help out, I'll be very grateful. However, I can only contact through discord as it's the most convenient one (^_^)'
