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I loved your idea to the earthling to arrive to a place only to discover that others already did bring all the technology and stuff from earth . That was something that didn't think possible. That was the main reason I really tried to read it. I mean it. I really tried. But alas I dropped it. The info dumps are terrible. It was so fucking bad that I skipped them and that was like 70% of the chapter. For me it made no sense to divide differents parts of the body. You could just create a stat named body or physical strength and be done with that. Make it 1000 levels and be done with that. Focus more on leveling skills or arts could be a cool twist. Maybe even tried to learn an ancient skill and leveling that up to revived it. But no, you decided that is was essential to include knee strength like our mc was a MMA fighter. Your idea is great. Really great. But your info dumps kill the novel. Reduce them as little as possible. And dont mention so much the numbers, this is not a mathematics forum. I wonder if someone even bother to check your calculations. Be brief about the calculations. And if you like to mention it. Put it on the author thoughts or in the auxiliary volumes. Tl, dr: Excellent idea, info dumps and so much numbers killed the novel for me. Solid 2. Recommended for people who like to read between info dumps.

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