Review Detail of TomRiffle101 in The Idle System
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This is the first review I've written. This is generally awesome. It's not amazing because I hate waiting! Other than that though I really want to say, well done. You've found yourself a good idea. Just don't go overboard and start doing massive 5 year jumps. You can do lucky treasures, but skipping time is really annoying, you could easily of said written a few chapters for the hunting in chapter 20-21. Other than that, I will b reading and reading this until you stop, which I hope isn't soon.
The Idle System
Pegaz
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I understand that, I was reading something a while ago and it just started skipping months and years ever other chapter. It god really annoying. I'll still read it, just I hope if you do skip long periods of time skip it over the chapter. Like come back after a month update then skip again and come back find something amazing put it away and carrying on skipping. It's up to you, just skipping can be really no oyimg. Good.work though!
Pegaz:I'll keep it in mind but I have to balance it too, if there's no time skip (even little ones) then the story would never progress, we'd be at chapter 400 after 2 years of hunting description etc.
