Review Detail of Shakin_Bacon in Pain

What I have gathered from reading the first few chapters is as follows. The writing quality is average, words are used in situations that they are not really supposed to be. I assume from the 22 chapters released currently that the stability of updates is very good. The story development is quite high whereas the character design and development is only average. The world background also follows the same trend, though I do think that it has a good premise.