Review Detail of DeJeL in The Ruler

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: I saw "Don't read this story. It's not worth your time." as the synopsis, I would only use something along similar lines if you dropped the novel, and then you should include the word dropped somewhere in the synopsis. Also, if you did drop the novel, I'd suggest publishing a new chapter saying such then deleting all the other chapters due to how short the story is as is. Two months is too long for a web novel unless on hiatus, and then such should be made clear.;,;. The plot felt slow, I am not really sure what to say about that though.;,;. Positive Feedback: Your world building is progressing at a good rate in comparison to your plot, and I really like the character development. Personal Feedback: I thought the story was too slow. I can see that there is a decent plot coming together, but I still can't begin to see the next milestone due to the lack of speed, thus I will not be continuing this story.