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howboutthatLv116yrhowboutthat

What is this plot and grammar 👎👎👎 honestly editor desperately needs a spell checker and you barely know anything about the mc yet he jumps way to far ahead without explaining a single thing to the readers like who is soul how old is he why is he the only active character I won’t be adding this to my library

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PaidThePrice

Liked it!

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PaidThePriceAuthorPaidThePrice

Ow god, someone actually read it. Also umm read chapter 2? I've never write before and we could fix the grammar.

6yr

AereoLv5Aereo

thx for that comment i wont be reading this

6yr

howboutthatLv11howboutthat

Sorry if that was harsh

PaidThePrice:Ow god, someone actually read it. Also umm read chapter 2? I've never write before and we could fix the grammar.

6yr