Review Detail of RockSoup in Heaven’s Cry

Due to his own incompetency Aria's father lost their family throne through a series of betrayal Without a choice she fights to get back what she believes is rightfully her's sacrificing anyone to further her goal. This is the story of how her single minded drive will lead to the creation of amazing miracles, horrible disasters and the resurrection of an era that has long turned into legend. The question will be asked. "Can you hear heaven's cry?........" *Yes the novel on RRL is also mine* * My orginal cover is too large so I’ll go without for now* I quite like the synopsis as it clearly tells all I would need to know without leaking too much information. I especially like the title and how it was able to create a link between your synopsis "Can you hear heaven's cry?........". I don't know what RRL is but i'll wait for your cover. At the beginning you may want to put '.' a period as it denotes the sudden ending of the topic. after saying "rightfully her's" you may want to add a comma. But don't listen to my critiques as i'm considered an Illiterate Friend. I'm mostly waiting to stockpile chapters before reading as a habit.