Review Detail of tabbyg123 in Last Wish System

I love the premise and general world building, but this is probably one of the laziest works of writing I've ever seen. Every action related scene feels like I'm reading a summary of what actually happened. The first fight that the MC ever goes through is basically just: "The MC fought with the bigger kid" "He was getting tired so he decided to end it" "He executed a feint. It worked. He walked back" And this theme continues on throughout the rest of the story until I dropped it 22 chapters in. Things happen out of the blue with little lead up, resulting in some of the most robotic/bland content and stupidly inconsistent pacing. There are also grammatical errors riddled throughout the chapters I've read that make the writing somewhat jarring and breaks what little immersion there is. I honestly cannot recommend this novel and it definitely does not live up to its 4.4 star rating.