Review Detail of C_523 in Last Wish System

I didn't want to leave a review until I had finished all the chapters. Over all I believe that this was an great story. The reason I only gave it 3 stars for writing quality was that general grammar errors and switching of pronouns are fairly common throughout the book. That being said I honestly didn't have any trouble understanding what was written so I dont think it was anything close to a major issue. Its just that I can easily imagine some people getting confused. The story development, character design and world background were awesome which made the book hard to put down. I found it very easy to lose track of time do to being immersed in the story.