Review Detail of Clear_Mind in Destroy your new life, repair it, destroy it again by doing crazy things while screaming YOLO!

Item: Destroy your new life, repair it, destroy it again by doing crazy things while screaming YOLO!
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Clear_MindLv26yrClear_Mind

So far this is not a good novel. The writing style is frantic and confusing. The author's poor grammar is obvious and interrupts the novel's flow. This admittedly caused me to stop reading after about ten paragraphs, so I was unable to get a proper read on both the character and world building.

Destroy your new life, repair it, destroy it again by doing crazy things while screaming YOLO!

ClemCa

Liked it!

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ClemCaAuthorClemCa

I said myself that when I started writting this I had about zero experience with writting later chapters are better and I myself think that the first chapters were quite bad

6yr

ClemCaAuthorClemCa

about the grammar it's probably because it wasn't only my first time writting, but also my first time translating from French to English (I'm French) later chapters are obviously better from all viewpoints

6yr