Review Detail of Cardinal_Steiner in The Genius' First Love

To be honest, the childish story that you wrote till here, i find it better than what you wrote after this. I love how childish and pure she was. At 500 right now, you broke her innocence too much. The story is too painful now. Pls do something about that. One can only read so much of tragedy in a story. Its gotten too much drama and the storyline now does not suit the title of the book 'The genius's fist love'. Pls think about what i said in the last sentence. I would love if you can/ could keep the story unique and not make it like the other dramatic romances we read with conspiracies and pain too common. Till chap 19 believe me i just loved how she was, her actions, her thoughts were so cute that one would definitely fall for her. Now she's like any other female protagonist and lost her cuteness which fascinated us so much. Pls don't break her too much. No offenses. I'm just in pain of her loosing herself which seems to me a little too unfair of the author.