Review Detail of TargetPractice1 in The World Conqueror

Hope you can check and rate it again, it improved! thank you!

Checked, the first chapter is still filled with grammatical errors. I would suggest you look over your punctuation (need periods and comma). Also a lot of capitalization needed on i's.

Hello, this novel was written from the start again, i hope you can check it again, and change the rating. Thank you!

It's a bit better. Still places that need commas and other grammar fixes. Is still hard to read from a native speaker.

That's due to the Novel not having an editor yet, and I'm glad to hear that it got better albeit a little :) hope you can at least change the rating because it will help the novel a lot! thank you