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azarth
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I have really been enjoying this story. I like the progression of the character but I feel like there is a lack of exploration of his character in the last 5 chapters. Keep up the good work.

Cultivating Civilization

Kulha

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Kulha
KulhaAuthorKulha

Thanks for your support! I'm glad that you're enjoying it! I'm trying to do some world building while adding little character details on the side right now. What kind of character exploration would you like to see?

azarth
azarthLv3azarth

I would say I'm looking for a bit more development of his flashback sequences. And also more on the technique and cultivation side. It seems like the cultivation has gone to the Wayside for the last few chapters. And he's not as advancing as quickly as he was before. At the same time I don't want you to rush your story because I really am enjoying how you write. So keep up the good work I just was curious about the new direction it seem like it was going in.

Kulha:Thanks for your support! I'm glad that you're enjoying it! I'm trying to do some world building while adding little character details on the side right now. What kind of character exploration would you like to see?
Kulha
KulhaAuthorKulha

I've been trying to keep the flashbacks to when Jack faints/gets knocked out since people complained that they broke the story up too much, but there will be more of them in the future. New skills and cultivation action is coming soon, I've been trying to build up the world around them with the last few chapters.

azarth:I would say I'm looking for a bit more development of his flashback sequences. And also more on the technique and cultivation side. It seems like the cultivation has gone to the Wayside for the last few chapters. And he's not as advancing as quickly as he was before. At the same time I don't want you to rush your story because I really am enjoying how you write. So keep up the good work I just was curious about the new direction it seem like it was going in.