Review Detail of Readingknight in VRMMORPG: Cosmic Order

Writing Quality: The grammar is little confusing and the author made pretty much a lot of mistake while writing Stability of updates: Don't know if the author is still writing this story he probably quit after 23 chapter Story development: it's fine not too bad but what I'm not satisfy in this story is the character habit in scratching their head's seriously? If the author decide to continue this story I suggest him don't make them scratch their head's too often Character design: not bad the only problem is the enemies their facing are a little limited in names for example a rat named Mouse mickey are you serious? XD and I saw change a girl name from Violet to Chrissy whats wrong with violet? World development: Pretty good using a VR technology to cultivate their strength for survival from the haze.