Review Detail of Dragon_Watcher in The Worst Swordsman
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This was a really weird read for me. I spent the first few chapters being quite disappointed with myself for continuing to read it. I was then confused on how drastically the writing got better. I honestly think the first few chapters need to be rewritten but, it's now a solid story that's has me looking forward to where it's going. The MC still needs some more development as a character as it is now but, I going to keep following this to see how it develops.
The Worst Swordsman
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Hello~ Author here. Just wanted to better understand what made the beginning of the story so bad... Was it the fight scene? I may have gone too far with the prologue again... hah... Seeing this review actually makes me happy though since it means someone actually read my story. I’d love to know your bias thoughts since it could help me improve in the next one I’m going to write. I’ve improved my writing skills since the time I actually wrote this (which was a year ago) and would love use the criticisms to help plan out a proper Xianxia plotline. The ones I have right now involve is one called ‘I Am A Spaceship!’ (On Wattpad) which is about a spaceship and it’s master that one day cultivate a special Mortal Puppet Dao and the other is called ‘Never Die’ which is still not properly planned out yet except for the fact that it’s a little like ‘X-Force’ (The X-men comics one) since it has four main characters and an antagonist that is just a regular kid despite his ominous powers. I still haven’t decided how I’ll turn that one into a Xianxia.