Review Detail of immortalpainter in Trial Husband

As far as third chapter goes, sorry. This is subpar from the translated novels as well as the original novels I've come across so far. I thought Qidian would curate the novels that they post over here from the competition, but I have my doubts after reading this. There's no rhyme or reason to their supposedly trial marriage. Each scene is happening so fast like in a blur. The background of the female lead isn't particularly interesting--or at least clear enough--to make us care about the character herself. Also, it's probably unfair, but we already have so many "Ning"s as female lead. I don't know if it's a really popular given name or not, but having something else as her name would be more interesting. Having said those things, I'll give 4 stars for effort. The English itself is quite decent, even though the pacing is really bad. I also actually really like the initial reason why the female and male leads have to see each other. Kudos for the idea! It's so interesting that I hope it will be explored more. I have high expectations to see more romance novels in this site. I hope the author improves fast---like, as soon as possible. Or give her an editor, I swear it'll improve more.