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MC and the other MC that you wrote have the same personality that it gets boring reading the same obsessed with his love and would die if something goes wrong to his partner and the drama everytime. it's a the same with your last blood elf MC, he start with easygoing character that do everything he wants . and then when he got a partner he became paranoid and obsesse. ugghhhhh.
and please .the strength of MC is equal to mortal shredding realm with a hundred ancient black dragon and you let him stay in novice village for like 12-15chaps hey nice salted fish mentality
I know you want to explain thing too much but at least separate it in aux chap..
why is he wasting time too much staying in 1 place, he knows the story right? then why not make use of it? I mean get resources instead of wasting time? I don't know the author's intent on MC not doing anything at all?? and too much explanation of what's happening around him.. just one chap and all I know is he made a breakthrough and stay at night at duans place , nothing more.
what a hypocrite
luna was strengthen so much but still affected like a child that can't do anything against an dumblefvckingdor .. He used dragon and pure elf blood on top of it. it's like you forced him to have conflict with the headmaster while he's obviously on making an enemy on umbridge. Now he had enemy on headmaster and ministry while he on other hand didn't make a force on his own.
if he just became pirate hunter then this event would not come . really naive thinking .