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Expertsource

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2017-08-19 JoinedTurkey
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  • Expertsource
    Expertsource1yr
    Replied to Expertsource

    I was going to give you more pointers and details and how to improve them, if you have put the comment and were objective. But since you didn't reveal the comment, I won't bother.

    altalt
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Expertsource
    Expertsource1yr
    Posted

    Boring. Writing Quality is mediocre Stability of Updates, i dont care Story Development is mediocre Character Design is average World Background is bad. The story is really boring. True and fake magic is stupid. People aren't that dumb. I don't buy it.

    altalt
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • Expertsource
    Expertsource1yr
    Posted

    Boring. Writing Quality is bad Stability of Updates, i don't care. Story Development is bad Character Design is bad World Background is mediocre.

    altalt
    Crazy Necromancer in the Ruined Tower
    Fantasy · Twilight_Lord
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  • Expertsource
    Expertsource1yr
    Posted

    Boring. Writing Quality, bad but still much better than others. Stability of Updates, i don't know. Story Development is bad. Character Design is bad but better than others. World Background bad but better than others. What annoyed me the most is introducing feautre of shadowing the echo, only to avoid it extremely irritating for dozens of chapters. For what? No good reason, if there's any at all.

    altalt
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Expertsource
    Expertsource1yr
    Posted

    Boring. Writing Quality is bad Stability of Updates, i don't know Story Development is bad Character Design is bad World Background is bad.

    altalt
    Super Necromancer System
    Fantasy · John_Doever
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  • Expertsource
    Expertsource1yr
    Posted

    Boring. Writing Quality is bad Stability of Updates, i don't know Story Development is bad Character Design is bad World Background is bad

    altalt
    I Can Make Everything Level UP
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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