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    Revox1d
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    he can recruit soldiers in the stormlands but poaching from other realms would be a nono. while spreading the guild around the realm would not make them all loyal to him ,he inserts himself in their life with a positive impact that he can further exploit in the long run. i could think of lots of examples .he can atleast use the guild to build up a good image amongst warriors around the realm and westeros always has been a martial oriented continent. lets see how the author will use the guilds in the end ,i think it has a lot of potentiell to play with.

    Ch 8 Back home
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  • Revox
    Revox3mth
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    thx for the chapter, would love some more crossovers (greys anatomy cough) keep it up (=

    Ch 52 Ch.52
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    Reincarnated into Modern Family
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  • Revox
    Revox4mth
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    thanks for the hard work.

    Ch 793 Chapter 792: Kung Pao Chicken and Mapo Tofu (End)
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    Master Druid in Hogwarts.
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  • Revox
    Revox5mth
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    good so far (= reminds me of "release that witch", one of my favourite novels. it lacks a little in the details of the kingdom building and the use of his golden finger(like how does he know certain things ?cement, glassmaking,traingplan for speacial ops etc ). but for a fanfic worth a read so far.

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    Starting Today I'll Work As A City Lord
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  • Revox
    Revox5mth
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    thx for the chapter. i vote for quarter final loss and 2 years later EM champions after his improvements

    Ch 22 Important!!!
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    Football/Soccer: I am the best
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  • Revox
    Revox5mth
    Commented

    thx for the chapter. u improve at fast pace (=

    Ch 20 Getting advice and national team?!
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    Football/Soccer: I am the best
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  • Revox
    Revox5mth
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    thx for the chapter. i think its gettin better with each chapter. but its a little to mechanical. i hope for more interactions with other players and coaching staffs. show what and how he tries to improve . maybe get him a mentor like person (his grandfather for example)overall some character development.i wouldnt recommend harem as its not some fantasy novel and its a lot harder to develop the caracters evenly without some of them getting lost in the story with nothing of substance to carry the storyline. better get him a supporting partner to rise alongside him. of course im no expert so take it with a grain of salt and just try to keep it up and improve along the way.[img=recommend]

    Ch 19 Winning the Bundesliga title
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  • Revox
    Revox5mth
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    thx for the chapter. he got in because kimmich got a red card but right after u wrote his first pass was to kimmich

    Ch 18 Getting called up to the first team
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  • Revox
    Revox6mth
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    thx for the chapter. i love kingdom building so please dont rush through it (=

    Ch 11 Lost the bet?*
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    One Piece: My wife is Nico Robin[Dropped]
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  • Revox
    Revox6mth
    Commented

    sounds good so far (=

    Ch 8 Enemies Shocked, Victor Rocked!!*
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  • Revox
    Revox7mth
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    thx for the chapter. feel the thunder (=

    Ch 146 Chapter 146: Charity Concert (3)
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    Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)
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  • Revox
    Revox8mth
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    thx for the chapter

    Ch 142 Chapter 141: Who is the Monster?
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    HP: The Arcane Thief
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  • Revox
    Revox8mth
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    thx for the chapter (=

    Ch 20 Chapter 20 – He who makes the rules…
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  • Revox
    Revox8mth
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    thx for the chapter

    Ch 18 Chapter 18 - Fire
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  • Revox
    Revox9mth
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    thx for the chapter

    Ch 17 Chapter 17 - Firsts
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  • Revox
    Revox9mth
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    thx for the chapter(=

    Ch 16 Chapter 16 – Two steps forward
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  • Revox
    Revox9mth
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    thx for the chap. i would like luna,she is smart ,thinks different and has a mystery aspect about her that could do well with the system.and she loves animals! in the end its up to you and im sure it will be good and interesting (= some1 unexpected would be nice too

    Ch 15 Chapter 15 – Dungeons, Dragons and Dances
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  • Revox
    Revox9mth
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    thx for the chapter

    Ch 14 Chapter 14 – Trips, Training and Tango
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  • Revox
    Revox9mth
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    thx for the chapter (=

    Ch 13 Chapter 13 – Reflections, Requirements and Research
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  • Revox
    Revox9mth
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    thx for the chapter (=

    Ch 12 Chapter 12 – Professor Potter and Presents
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