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BrotherWorm1yrCommentedThey are all trying to court a 10 year old? đ¤
His oldest sister, Kathryn (10) was considered a beauty. Men would call her Fairy Kate due to pale skill and soft mannerism. Men from all over Fermion vied to court Kathryn to Helen utter delight.- BrotherWorm1yrCommented"Mine is bigger," Poul stated calmly.
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Well he is certainly not cultivating his brain with mana đ¤Ł
"You're young, you have a very powerful body, judging by the fact that you are still alive after all of this, and you are traveling with a ton of Ice Wood toward the southeast. That Ice Wood is obviously for the special exam," the guard said with a smirk. "Also, you kind of feel like a student of the Warrior Academy." - BrotherWorm1yrCommented
Superior firepower is stronger.. đââď¸
"YAY!" Blue Dragon cheered as he swooped over, giving a surprise hug to both the dragons. "There's nothing stronger than family!" - BrotherWorm1yrCommented"It doesn't really matter," Blake smiled coldly as he quoted, "In face of superior firepower... All plots and schemes are moot!"
- BrotherWorm1yrCommentedBlake snorted as he leaned forward from his chair, "I think we made a mistake in sending a small contingent out."
- BrotherWorm1yrCommented"BLUE! BLUE!" She cried helplessly and tears formed in her golden eyes. "HELP MEEEE!"
- BrotherWorm1yrCommentedCh 190 Misunderstanding Dragons
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The story is clichĂŠ, with a villain-protagonist who doesn't even question why he is supposed to kill the original protagonists. Well, I guess it doesn't even matter, because they are written like some ordinary villains themselves. The first protagonist doesn't care that forcing a girl to marry him is an evil move, because "She will come to love me, when I get the best grades and become the strongest". He even tries to get his teachers number while handing in his exam sheets. Yeah, that is the kind of writing quality you can expect from this novel. Another example - this time from the villain-protagonist: "hey girl, we just met, but I can totally cure your sick father without even knowing what kind of illness he has... Why is it hard for you to trust me?"
- BrotherWorm1yrCommentedXiao Chen smiled, "I can go out, with your mobile number?"
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" I don't know what kind of sickness your father has, but I can totally cure him.. What, you don't trust me?"
"Do you trust me?" - BrotherWorm1yrCommentedXiao Chen was an orphan, but he was adopted by an old man in childhood who took him to the mountains.
- BrotherWorm1yrPosted
Tough read. The world building and the premise of the story are great, but the following points make me cringe from time to time (minor spoilers): the protagonist is supposed to be the former leader of a special forces unit, but it would've been more fitting if he was just some random guy. He risks fainting in the field (on multiple occasions), sends his most unfitting subordinate on a diplomatic mission (that guy is a fanatic who doesn't shy away from using an excessive amount of force) and tries to motivate another subordinate by basically telling him that suicide is also an option.
- BrotherWorm1yrCommentedIt wasn't as if he was going to meet the young Head of Church of Water again.
- BrotherWorm1yrCommented
So his name is 526 now?
He promptly stood up as soon as he heard his name. Then, picking up his guitar, he followed the staff member to the stage. - BrotherWorm1yrCommented
Rookie mistake. He should've used blunt damage against slimes... đ¤
It turned into a poorly crafted spear which Nial thrust forward. - BrotherWorm1yrCommented"It does, but it's not entirely necessary for me. I'm a god, after all. People are already worshiping me the old-fashioned way."
- BrotherWorm1yrCommented"The son of the Superior Mother. The brother of the Daughter of Death. The ultimate good boy."