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Ali

Ali

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2017-04-24 JoinedGlobal
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    Ali1yr
    Replied to Melkpie

    Agreed read up to Chapter 229 the story is trash after 70 chapters the grammar becomes unbearable

    altalt
    Emulator: Opening Talent Super Gigolo
    Eastern · Deep Fry Rocks
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  • Ali
    Ali1yr
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    confused as fuck by the story it jumps around and develops to fast . the grammar is really bad but improves later on still too much is happening it makes the story unreadable i did enjoy the first 30 chapters then it got to confusion of the highest with all the fashbacks and stuff

    altalt
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    Sci-fi · Rapture_Tales
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